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Friday, 16 August 2019
Tuesday, 6 August 2019
Fisherman should pay for every fish they catch! - planning
Planning :
Not Against :
There is a lot of over-fishing. That leads to broken food chains - and ocean animals dying of starvation.
Too much shrimp
Stop Massive extinction.
Stealing.ho
Open ocean .
Problems to do with fisherman paying
My ideas :
1 Stop massive extinction
Not Against :
There is a lot of over-fishing. That leads to broken food chains - and ocean animals dying of starvation.
Too much shrimp
Stop Massive extinction.
Stealing.ho
Open ocean .
Problems to do with fisherman paying
My ideas :
1 Stop massive extinction
2 Food Chains be back.
3 Stealing - crime .
Writing :
Fisherman pay for every fish they catch. I know this sounds ridiculous but should they pay for every fish they catch? The reasons why they should pay are because it will help stop massive extinction, food chains will come back, therefore fishing without paying should be a crime.
With a mass of extinction it's calculated that around by 0.01 and 0.1% species become or will become extinct each year . Between 200 and 2000 marine life go extinct every year. I know right? . With fisherman boats cast a huge and heavy nets that are held open by heavy weighting doors. Weighing sereveral tons. Each are dragged arcoseed the oceans floor .
Destrution of habitats , Climate change and broken food chains are the reasons why marine life are becoming extinct . Fisherman are over fishing to the point where there would not be enough food for the predactors who prey on the fish they catch. The fish they catch can also become extinct .
Over fishing can become a crime how much fish you can take from the ocean . We already got pollution in our oceans there are to many marine life dying and will become extinct because of that. So why is it okay to overfish? Its not okay , and should be a crime for over fishing. As well as not paying for the fish you catch. That should become a crime , if you don't pay for the fish you catch should come a crime. So yes! Fisherman should pay for the fish they catch. Too stop marine life from extinction . Its greed that's not okay.
Conclusion : This essay has demonstracted that I have used facts and persuasion on explaining and breaking down points on why fisherman should pay for every fish they catch. Destrustion of habitats , climate change - and broken food chains , a mass of extinction and over fishing .
With a mass of extinction it's calculated that around by 0.01 and 0.1% species become or will become extinct each year . Between 200 and 2000 marine life go extinct every year. I know right? . With fisherman boats cast a huge and heavy nets that are held open by heavy weighting doors. Weighing sereveral tons. Each are dragged arcoseed the oceans floor .
Destrution of habitats , Climate change and broken food chains are the reasons why marine life are becoming extinct . Fisherman are over fishing to the point where there would not be enough food for the predactors who prey on the fish they catch. The fish they catch can also become extinct .
Over fishing can become a crime how much fish you can take from the ocean . We already got pollution in our oceans there are to many marine life dying and will become extinct because of that. So why is it okay to overfish? Its not okay , and should be a crime for over fishing. As well as not paying for the fish you catch. That should become a crime , if you don't pay for the fish you catch should come a crime. So yes! Fisherman should pay for the fish they catch. Too stop marine life from extinction . Its greed that's not okay.
Conclusion : This essay has demonstracted that I have used facts and persuasion on explaining and breaking down points on why fisherman should pay for every fish they catch. Destrustion of habitats , climate change - and broken food chains , a mass of extinction and over fishing .
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